desperation -V2.0

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description of desperation., submitted on Dec 26, 2003:

This is one of my favourite drawings, even with the mistakes (i'll correct them as soon as i can).

The girl's expression shows a lot, I think: fear, despair, submission, anger, impotence...
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This is an "upgrade" of my previous work, desperation.
As a matter of fact, I thought of submiting an edit instead of a new deviation, but this way you can see how deviantArt helped me to improve my skills. This new version is REALLY better than the old one.


I got to thank u all for that, but specially to , , and . Watching their works and reading their tips really helped me and inspired me to do better things.

Anyway, there are some slight improvements for me to do. But i'm afraid of screwing everything else .

Hope u like it!
PS: "Desespero" means desperation in portuguese, for those that don't speak portuguese
Edit: Made some levels correction in photoshop so it was more faithfull to the original piece

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B, HB, 2B, 2H pencils on the same crappy paper.